Fractured before we are born.
Shattered, maybe crazed at the end.
In between all is light and luminaria,
except in the northern reaches of New Mexico
where the Tradicionalistas insist on lighting
small fires in the farolito lined streets,
causing dark spots before my bedazzled eyes.
Rattled by your flashing badge,
red and blue over and over again,
what can I do but plead guilty
in the face of this third degree light,
mend the chipped surface of my conscience,
and behave as if nothing happened on the way
to pick up the cake at the bakery –
its tens of candles sparkling
like stars hanging on the lip of sky over the Sargasso Sea.
The same sea our ancestors feared for the monsters
harboured in its darkness as they lay at anchor
under a gibbous moon in all their mothic finery.
When the air clears and all the gifts have been opened,
we see our glass etched by the spider’s web,
we see that fashions change,
and the brighter candles burn the less we see.
lights are on at the dVerse prompt night
Happy Birthday
14 Saturday Dec 2013
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wow. interesting dance…i feel melancholy on the brightest lights burning less in the end..ah i have felt the third degree light as well…ha. there is a subtle humor in this that cuts as well…happy birthday indeed…
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I love “small fires in the farolito lined streets” and I understand how light too bright can hide things people do not want to be seen…can be taken several ways..enjoyed this!
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ha…that last line… so true…sometimes the darkness speaks louder than all the candles in the world… cool images…loved esp. our glass etched by the spider’s web…
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I think that lights can make us blind to the darkness.. true and very important
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I like the image of “small fires in the farolito lined streets” and the glimpse into New Mexico Ron. Happy birthday!
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i love this poem, for its subtlety and brilliance … how strange and sweet it is, one of the most innovative and interesting things i’ve read in the blogs. tony
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thank you Tony. I always appreciate your encouraging comments.
ron
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I like the ideas that the brighter candles burn the less we see. A fascinating poem all around.
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Intriguing. I loved the imagery and that last line pricked me somewhere within. Great write.
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