It is a charcoal sketch of a day.
A black swirl of starlings
-one mind, one pulse,
swing, turn, dart
-harmony, music for the eyes.
Sunflowers bend under the weight of their seeds
-a golden splash in this orphaned day.
The fields, one newly mown
another fresh and black from the plow
raise the scent of musk, perfume the
air with the fragrance of earth.
Down the pasture sheep chew
seemingly absent minded.
Midges and flies raise a dust storm
over twitching ears and flicking tails.
As the shepherd swings the gate open
he whistles “The Shepherd’s Song”.
Our dogs take it all in through the maw
of their senses as they glide through
the vale and move sheep over the swells.
I can only go on naming one thing
after another…barn, crow, deer, fence…,
as if peering through cracks in a wall.
Watching The Dogs
13 Friday Sep 2013
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Great beginning! You really pull the reader in with the first line and then first stanza. Visual, photographic imagery infused with meaning.
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Thank you, as always, for reading my poetry and taking time to leave comments. I really appreciate the good opinion of a talented writer. It may take some time for me to catch up but I look forward to reading what you have written while I was away on my walkabout.
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hooray! how i’ve missed reading you!
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thanks ann. i see you have been busy and am looking forward to reading your stories now that i am back from my walkabout.
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did you do a walkabout for real?
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it was more metaphor than real…i did not go to the outback.
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I really like this poem and read it several times. I can picture it clearly and understand it. A miracle!
I wonder why that is so. Perhaps it is because we have both come back after an extended absence. 🙂
Glad you are back too.
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