A junkie,
an old pier,
the edge of the Mississippi River –
clenching her fists,
leaning into lemon light.
Her mouth, a bruise in sheer skin,
moves, forms a word.
The sound of her breath
floats over brown water.
She opens her hands,
small and white,
black petals swirl,
water carries them away.
The word, the only word for miles,
follows them down to the sea.
Again
15 Monday Sep 2014
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God–this one hurts. So beautiful and painful. That river runs through my heart as well.
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as i cannot put it any better than mr. crabcakes, i’ll just concur. beautifully tragic.
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thanks ann.
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thanks jcc…I don’t know what it is about that muddy water but it has a grip on my imagination.
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gorgeous ~
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a delta song Ron….and oh… the images. lemon light, sheer skin, black petals….
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Intriguing and unusual imagery-I’ve not seen the area but visceral none the less.
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