It was a phase,
everything a parade of shadows on the wall.
I step forward now, restless, uncertain
about how to feed the appetite I am.
Am I too fragile,
or are the good moments too few
in between the coming and going?
Strange happiness washes over me,
this blade of warm sun convincing me
I do not live in a cave.
Am I too fragile, or are the good moments too few in between the coming and going? – The uncertainty here tells the reader you aren’t in the cave brilliantly. It’s convincing those who don’t feel it that’s hard, I reckon.
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