A river works hard to return to the ocean.
Eroding its own bed, dividing, cutting,
discerning its way, deep, into the parent rock.
How deep must it go into the ocean
before the river no longer remains?
Where does river become ocean?
In the fathoms of muddy water,
where it's almost turned back.
Where the visible is amended by the invisible.
The river's movement is its vanishing -
and it becomes the insistent ocean,
folding into the pulse of the tide,
returning, to pull forever on a tragic shore,
where nothing remains whole.
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"How far is true enough? How far into the earth
can vision go and still be love?" The Age of Reason, Jorie Graham
Fathom
10 Sunday May 2026
Posted in poems
Ronald, I absolutely love your poem! We share an affinity with water and its poetic possibilities. Have a lovely Sunday, my friend 😊💛☮️🌻🌊
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Thank you Tyler…there is no end to the possibilities.
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Beautiful! This poem will stick with me a long time.
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Thanks Bob, that really means a lot to me.
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…a tragic shore….
…where nothing remains whole….
…visible
invisible…..
The rover river is divisive.
Shores are elusive.
I can fathom.
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Thank you Holly, I really love what you have done here.
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It is painful to read these words,
on Mother’s Day.
The “parent rock” seems unyielding, adamantine, like granite or diamond, or like…adamantine. Diamant. Diamond wall, or oceanic crystalline prism, difficult to…
peer through and to also transcend.
The river bends and wends and winds toward Eternity, the ocean, which it carved in the first place (out of muddy water?).
The Ocean both child and progenitor, both descendant and ancestor, both parent and child….
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Yes, circles within circles…. I am sorry about the pain – it’s not what I intended to provoke on Mother’s Day.
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