(After Mary Oliver)
When I lived in the city
I dreamed I was made of bricks.
When I lived by a small round pond,
my dreams were made of crows' feet
leaving prints in the mud—I was the black locust,
my root a robust artery,
my face a spray of blossoms
brimming with satisfied bees.
Then I was walking the river's bank—
I knew the rough currents,
I knew the wreck of driftwood.
I knew the harlequin, small sea-tossed duck,
white stripes, slate body, an eye for danger.
I dreamt the white of water,
I became a bead of foam on the duck's gloss.
It's inescapable, and I don't want to escape—
this buoyancy, the letting go, feet unleashed,
the remedy for gravity and shape.
Now I am here. Later I will be there—
I will be the moonlight threading darkness,
stitching the night open with stars.
In Dreamland
11 Saturday Jul 2026
Posted in poems
I like this poem’s transitions…
from one object and idea, one expression or metaphor…
to the next. Its sense of awe, loss, and wonder.
I like these lines:
“…my dreams were made of crow’s feet…leaving prints….”
“…my root a robust artery,
my face a spray of blossoms
brimming with satisfied bees.”
“an eye for danger”
The night is lovely, wide, tangible and intangible. Mysterious, open, and wondrous.
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Thanks Holly, I’m not sure why but this is one of my favorite poems I have written. I think it’s the crows’ feet and satisfied bees that get me to smile.
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Wow. Just a stunning poem. The imagery jumps off the page.
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Thanks Bob, this is what my brain on “Oliver” looks like.
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I became a bead of foam on the duck’s gloss.
It’s inescapable, and I don’t want to escape—
lovely!
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Thanks.
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