On the edge of town
oaks and pines unfold
on a spray of wetland
across my trail,
knotted catbrier pins my arms;
ten yards away a young buck, new rack,
rises up on hind legs, tongue flicking
to taste the liquid swampy air.
He lowers his legs in a smooth slow sweep,
hind feet digging into the soft ground.
His front feet touch down so gently,
I couldn't even say he dimpled the wet earth.
The buck chewing, easing into the trees,
thorns release my skin;
a slight twisting light in the brier
a sudden burst of air—
black-bronze feathers unfurl
a flash of white crescent
a subtle lean of wing and weight
a sharp scent past my nose—
its wake already closing.
That night, stretched in my bed,
I drift in half-sleep,
night folds in on day
like feathers tucked, everything touching—
I see the buck raise his long legs,
the hawk's wind lifts the hair on my arms.
Distance
26 Sunday Jul 2026
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How fortunate you are to observe nature in the forest. How blessed you are to relive it again in your dreams.
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Thank you, yes, to have this in my memory bank, well, I am grateful.
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That was quite a walk! These memories will last forever.
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Boy, that was the best walk ever! I’m so glad we did it together.
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Love this. What a scene to witness. And that last stanza is so good.
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Thanks Bob, a little patch of wet ground on the edge of town, it was the luckiest walk ever…well next to the one I took down the aisle with my wife. It is another poem inspired by reading Mary Oliver, her ability to see the world on its own terms then figure a way to talk about the experience just moves something in me.
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Ronald, I think this is the best work I’ve seen by you yet. I know I haven’t seen it all of course. I always enjoy your writing, but this one in particular brought back memories of walking my grandpas property with my brother and how my brother would point out deer, raccoons, opossums and turkeys. Sometimes to show me good hunting spots, sometimes just to show me. We used to catch frogs out there too at the little ponds while my dad was hanging tree stands. Thank you for inviting us all down memory lane and bringing us all into your world!
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Thanks William, making these connections is why I write…it is a great feeling to have memories that resonate for other people like they do for me. That was one lucky walk I took with my wife in a small town park.
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It’s really well written, I love the imagery and how you invoke melancholy with your words 🙂
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Thank you for reading my poems.
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