Space between them
She suggests letting time pass,
fill the space with seconds, minutes, then let’s see.
He wants words to fill the hour glass shaped space,
let time take care of itself.
In time, words fill the space.
Breathless, she says “enough” and turns to face a
canyon shaped space, with its rocks, and the shapes
of birds in search of upward drafts where air takes
the shape of warmth.
He decides to hold his breath, wanting more from her
than shapes and space and rocks and birds.
With breath and lips and tongue shaped words she asks
him what he wants. He tells her something solid,
some thing he can hold in his bone shaped hands.
Some thing he can believe in when words subside.
She offers him a heart shaped rock.
It reminds her that longing is a window in her heart.
She wants to belong, not be owned, just an end to longing.
He wants the owning, needs to be owned,
to bring the sky down like a blanket, wrap their lives in blue paper
and be the shape of the earth when it was young and lush.
She wants to be the shape of a canyon, a space where sky exists.
She wants to feel the weight of rock, to know the shape of solid space.
She wants to see the bird shaped sky rise on its heart shaped wings.
Do all lovers find love in lust and hope?
With just these things between them – this shape, this rock, this sky,
this angel of time and space.
Open link night as dVerse poets
Lovers, Shapes and Space
13 Thursday Feb 2014
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Beautiful… Sigh…the resounding difference between lovers wants verbalized, I’m quite certain, still echo in the walls of Grand Canyon. Love this 🙂
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just an end to longing…. sad.. I, too, wrote a sad story of lovers… must be the season or at least the day for it.. going against the grain.. I prefer it that way… lovely poem, Ron, as always.
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When expectations are so different it’s hard for love to grow.. and ownership cannot enter… love this Ron
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I was very impressed with your use of language in this which approach a heartfelt brilliance in spots. A very strong poem and a great read. >KB
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Thank you so much KB…I value your opinion. Thank you for following my blog…I’m looking forward to reading your poetry regularly…Ron
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You are more than welcomed. >KB
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longing is a window to her heart…smiles…relationships are not easy when we are not on the same page…expectations are hard just to let go of as well…communication is key…we all have wants…and too long unfulfilled…can lead dangerous places…
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Such a deep read, I loved it. The different wants and the courage to voice them.
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I like the contrast here:
She wants to belong, not be owned, just an end to longing.
He wants the owning, needs to be owned,
Lovey writing Ron ~
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You have given the two different points of view well here; but with the differences, I wonder if love will last.
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This is wonderfully moving, really illustrating how two people can come into a relationship and have such different needs, wants and expectations from the apparent same thing. So very well illustrated…
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Thank you Freya…I somehow screwed up my link and it took you to the wrong poem, sad to be so technically inept…thankfully Brian fixed it.
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It doesn’t matter to me – it was a wonderful read! Technical ineptitude is nothing to be ashamed of… I rejoice in the inability to drive a computer without supervision… 😉
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I enjoyed this – the teasing out of the contrasts – love coping somehow – is there a common purpose? At what level is the attraction working? The disjointed nature of the poem unsettles the reader, the slow pace adds depth. Questions are raised and remain unresolved. Beauty resides in the expression of the thoughts and the symbolism. A rewarding read.
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Hi Ron – I listened again to your reading – a good pace, inflection, and intonation. Looking forward to workshopping with you – you can reach me at exitonpch(at)yahoo(dot)com ~ Michael
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there is so much understanding here…wisdom. clarity. if you really get stuff as well as your words suggest, your life must be simpler than mine 😉
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hehe, i don’t know about that…my wife might have a different opinion…
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What beautiful imagery. So much is being said here…I love it all. Beautiful poetry Ron. And it is so nice to hear your voice! Thank you 😉
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Thank you, really, so much.
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